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Rewriting classics... #5: In the Air Tonight |
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 Topic: Rewriting classics... #5: In the Air TonightPosted: March 20 2021 at 07:49 |
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Why did we neglect our rewriting duties for so long...? So, here in issue #5 an artist we propose upon insisting demand from JD - a classic by a man much mocked here on PA. Some even consider he is "the man who ruined prog". But admit... You all know In The Air Tonight by heart! But those lyrics definitely need some rewriting... A short reminder of the rules for those who want to join the effort: 1. One line per post (to stimulate the collaborative aspect). 2.
It has to sound a bit like the original (rhyme, sounding like... like
kids who mimic a song without knowing what they're actually singing). 3. It also has to fit the number of feet of the verses (more or less). 4. Same length as the original song. 5.
If in the original song there are some repetitions, it is up to the
person whose turn it is to go that way or not: to repeat or not to repeat, that's no question. In a good prog tradition, the lyrics don't necessarily have to make much sense... And don't hesitate to start a Rewriting classics #6, if you feel a certain urge... Let's go! |
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Posted: March 20 2021 at 07:50 |
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Why men need it: flying on their brooms in tights, up North
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Posted: March 20 2021 at 07:57 |
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And I've been painting this old monument, for my sweet wife, (I'm bored) |
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Posted: March 20 2021 at 08:22 |
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Don't you feed it, those worms are there to fight, with snorts, with snorts
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Posted: March 20 2021 at 08:29 |
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I can smell it, coming in the air - the fart. oh Lord
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 A shot of me as High Priestess of Gaia during our fall festival. Ceterum censeo principiis obsta |
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Posted: March 20 2021 at 08:32 |
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Heck, if you fold me they will be frowning
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Posted: March 20 2021 at 13:18 |
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I could not send a ham
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Posted: March 20 2021 at 15:31 |
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I've been out of phase, don't give a damn
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Posted: March 21 2021 at 14:41 |
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But I don't mow if you to go to Siam
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Posted: March 21 2021 at 16:18 |
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Well I washed my hair and I thawed out a squid Edited by JD - March 21 2021 at 16:18 |
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Posted: March 21 2021 at 18:17 |
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I clawed out my own two eyes
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Posted: March 22 2021 at 05:44 |
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Combination code known by only I
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Posted: March 22 2021 at 05:58 |
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, my peanut butter pie
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Posted: March 22 2021 at 08:46 |
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And I can feel your bum through your hair tonight (So bored)
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My bowels are fainting for this movement through this strife (On Board)
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Posted: March 22 2021 at 12:54 |
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I can peel it, won't you join the lemon fight (so sour)
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Posted: March 22 2021 at 14:12 |
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Well I've been grating poor head cheese, boar call my wife, my sword (poor gourd)
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Posted: March 22 2021 at 14:44 |
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It's still September, my member won't scurry
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Posted: March 22 2021 at 15:11 |
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Now fools why will they get wet
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Posted: March 22 2021 at 18:26 |
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It's the squirt kind, the lemon rind that she always "et"
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