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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 01 2012 at 18:49
Originally posted by Alitare Alitare wrote:

What's wrong about writing about losing a loved one? That, in and of itself, can be ambiguous.
Take, for example, Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat'. It is effectively a song about losing a loved one (two of them, possibly). The song isn't regarding losing a loved one in death, but in betral, secrecy, grief, jealousy, regret, and virulent acceptance. It is so ambiguous and vague, yet scathingly direct. It ain't prog, either. Of course, hardly anybody could beat L. Cohen at the lyrics game, prog or otherwise. When it comes to pure poetry, I'd take him over Dylan (although not musically, not ever). 
I don't think I had a relevant point, though. I just had 'Famous Blue Raincoat' going on in my head - among others. And the skylight is like skin for a drum I'll never mend. And all the rain fell down, amen, on the works of last year's man. So bitter, so deep, so striking and well-written. I wish he'd stop making music and just release beat poetry (which is kinda what he's doing now, too bad his voice is wrecked beyond repair). 



I don't think there's much particularly wrong about love lyrics, or lyrics about losing someone. It's just that they are so common, that I thank prog artists for attempting, often enough, to depart from such toppics. Of course, they are not always succesful trying to diversify their lyrics, and sometimes you will find someone writing better love lyrics than progers writing... whatever they want to write about. But sometimes you will find some good prog artsits writing good lyrics too. I just don't think that prog artistst are worse lyristist just because they are prog, nor do I think that pop or rock artists are worse or better lyricists just for writing love songs.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: June 01 2012 at 20:47
Originally posted by Dellinger Dellinger wrote:

Originally posted by ZeppelinTull ZeppelinTull wrote:

Have you ever listened to the album by Genesis called: The Lamb Lies Down On Broadway? It has some of the greatest lyrics and music i've ever heard.


Yeah, I know that album and those lyrics. And they don't do anything to me but put me away from some of the songs. I don't really like those "funny-like" lyrics and so on, about slippermen with squeaky feet, and serpents with female faces and so on. Don't get me wrong, I love fantasy and mythology, I just don't like the way Gabriel paints those fantasy images in my head. I would say the same things about songs like "Musical Box", "Return of the Giant Hogweed", "Fountain of Salmacis", and "All in a Mouses Night" (though that last one wasn't Gabriel's work).


Personally, I think Gabriel-rea Genesis was one of the better users of fantasy lyrics; I love the weirdness I get from those albums.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 03:40
Peter Sinfield singlehanded elevates prog lyrics.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 08:33
I think progressive rock has some of the best lyricists ever, both during its golden era and today. Many progressive rock songs have wonderful poetry to go along with the beautiful music. Sometimes when bands try to blend in too much comedy in their work I might find that a bit disturbing, but that's just my preferences, I still consider it to be excellent from an "objective" standpoint. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 09:50
Every genre has bad lyrics and good lyrics. Take a look at this:

Living easy, living free
Season ticket on a one-way ride
Asking nothing, leave me be
Taking everything in my stride
Don't need reason, don't need rhyme
Ain't nothing I would rather do
Going down, party time
My friends are gonna be there too
I'm on the highway to hell
No stop signs, speed limit
Nobody's gonna slow me down
Like a wheel, gonna spin it
Nobody's gonna mess me round
Hey Satan, payed my dues
Playing in a rocking band
Hey Momma, look at me
I'm on my way to the promised land
I'm on the highway to hell
(Don't stop me)
And I'm going down, all the way down
I'm on the highway to hell

I'd take (nearly) any prog lyrics over this.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 13:13
   I tend to like prog lyrics, certainly more than anything played by other bands people I know listen to. Some lyrics can be very profound, intelligent, and emotional, but of course some lyrics are outright nonsense, at least to me. (Jon Anderson, I'm thinking of you)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 15:22
Originally posted by heptadecagon heptadecagon wrote:

   I tend to like prog lyrics, certainly more than anything played by other bands people I know listen to. Some lyrics can be very profound, intelligent, and emotional, but of course some lyrics are outright nonsense, at least to me. (Jon Anderson, I'm thinking of you)

Just saying, you are entitled to your opinion but these lyrics are some of the finer poetry I've ever seen. Not THE best maybe, but still freaking awesome.

"Straight light moving and removing, sharpness of the colour sun shine
Straing light searching all the meanings of the song
Long last treatment of the telling that relates to all the words sung
Dreamer easy in the chair that really fits you

Love comes to you and then after, dream on to the heart of the sunrise
Sharp! Distance! How can the sun with its arms all around me
Sharp! Distance! How can the wind with so many around me
I feel lost in the city..."

Add the incredible musical contrasts in this song, the excellent dynamic shifts and the plain godlike musicianship of all members in the band... I just want to close my eyes and fade away every time I hear "Heart of the Sunrise". Granted, there are better lyricists than Jon Anderson, but I've never read anything bad from him, at least not from the 70s. 

@mister nobody

Just my preference but I tend to get really bored with those lyrics glorifying the typical rock n roll lifestyle. I guess I prefer the fantasy stuff etc, I just don't find anything silly in it like many people seem to do ^^



Edited by Josef_K - August 26 2012 at 15:27
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 15:50
I guess something a lot of people dislike about prog's lyrics is they're often "nerdy," but I guess to me, the nerdiness is what makes some of them interesting. I find fantasy more interesting because if I wanted realism, I'd go out into the real world every once in a while. I rather like most of prog's lyrics, especially the ones that make no sense.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 15:51
Originally posted by Josef_K Josef_K wrote:

 

@mister nobody

Just my preference but I tend to get really bored with those lyrics glorifying the typical rock n roll lifestyle. I guess I prefer the fantasy stuff etc, I just don't find anything silly in it like many people seem to do ^^


Indeed. Fantasy lyrics are created with more imagination and creativity than "lets make a rock hit" lyrics, which I find all over the rock scene.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 16:10
I don't think that prog is plagued by poor lyrics any more than any other genre of music.  You should try listening to some country music ("Drop Kick Me Jesus Through the Goal Posts of Life" or "Proud to be an American" come to mind) or current pop music ("Skater Boy" or some of Taylor Swift's musings anyone?) for some really god-awful lyrics.  I saw that the OP mentioned Fish as an example.  I think Fish is an incredible lyricist, as is Peter Hammill, Roger Waters, Neil Peart (although I didn't like some of his earlier Randian lyrics, they were still well-written I thought).  Now some prog falls into the Tolkien trap and when they yammer on about goblins and orcs and swords and wizards, it can start to sound pretty cheesy (although I even like this in small doses).  
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 26 2012 at 16:59
Robert Wyatt's lyrics aren't great in the first SM albums, but in a way the lyrics are what made the albums great. Confused If you know what I meanLOL
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 30 2012 at 11:59
Hi folks, can anyone help me identify the song from the opening lyrics below? It's from around 1970 by a guitar/bass/piano/drums/vocal combo. My dad taped it onto his old reel-to-reel but never remembered who it was by!

I walk the crowded pavements
The people I see
All trying to be what they're not
They act just like me (x4)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 04 2012 at 19:00
I'm a huge Dream Theater fan, yes. But sometimes... the lyrics just make me cringe. I mean, "The Count of Tuscany" is such a brilliant piece instrumentally, even if there is a bit of Petrucci/Rudess noodling. The lyrics, however, are just a completely different story... They don't work for me. Same for some of the material on Systematic Chaos. Too cheesy! I mean, I miss the DT songs that are a little deeper, not the ones talking about a pharoah's wrath or warmongering general. Save that for the power metal people. But in general, progressive rock lyrics (outside of some DT stuff) are really top-notch, ESPECIALLY Peter Sinfield. 
I consider drone metal to be progressive...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 04 2012 at 19:09
Originally posted by RedNightmareKing RedNightmareKing wrote:

I'm a huge Dream Theater fan, yes. But sometimes... the lyrics just make me cringe. I mean, "The Count of Tuscany" is such a brilliant piece instrumentally, even if there is a bit of Petrucci/Rudess noodling. The lyrics, however, are just a completely different story... They don't work for me. Same for some of the material on Systematic Chaos. Too cheesy! I mean, I miss the DT songs that are a little deeper, not the ones talking about a pharoah's wrath or warmongering general. Save that for the power metal people. But in general, progressive rock lyrics (outside of some DT stuff) are really top-notch, ESPECIALLY Peter Sinfield. 

I'm a DT fan too, and they've had some good lyrics in the past. 

Some of their recent stuff, though, you're right, the lyrics are very cheesy. 'The Count of Tuscany', 'A Nightmare to Remember', 'The Dark Eternal Night' etc. 

I personally find Transatlantic's stuff to be very cheesy. Instrumentally, it's good, but the lyrics, oh god, the LYRICS.

I think Steven Wilson is a very good lyricist. Some may disagree. But I enjoy both the music and the lyrics in his work. 

Overall, I think a lot of prog lyrics are leagues ahead of what passes for pop music in the charts these days. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 05 2012 at 06:35
If someone says that, show them any Peter Hammill/VdGG song and that's it.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 05 2012 at 08:25
Originally posted by Horizons Horizons wrote:

Originally posted by Stevo Stevo wrote:

Originally posted by coolerking coolerking wrote:

I remember Q magazine reviewing (I think) Big Generator and they said Jon Anderson's lyrics would struggle to get a pass in A level English.

He definitely comes up with certain phrases that fit beautifully to certain passages of the music but in general I find his lyrics incomprehensible.
That used to really bother me about YES, until I started to think of his lyrics like I would an impressionistic painting. They are very effective at creating a mood , or a suggestion of a scene.
 
That's how they're supposed to be interrupted. Not all lyrics have to be blatant stories, or have zero subtlety. They can be ambiguous, mysterious, abstract. Too me, lyrics are another instrument. They can just sound good to make me connect to them, not talk about losing a love one or whatever. 

Jon Anderson says that is what his lyrics -he's the fifth instrument in Yes---what you describe about Yes lyrics---he wanted the words to create a sound and feel---a sound poem---at least that's what he said a Yes peak of creativity---later on he'd get a little "airey-fairey"---as Howe said---.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 07 2012 at 08:08
I don't understand why many feel progressive music has the most poorest lyrics.
I personally feel they have the best lyrics.
Its just that not many understand the feel or the tone of the lyrics which makes it looks bad.
But, I would say those people are just crippled to not contemplate something that beautiful.
Take any artist.
Opeth, Yes, Transatlantic, Neal Morse, Dream Theater, Jethro Tull, ELP, Rush.
I always adore the music and the lyrics equally.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 17 2012 at 10:57
'Rotten eyeballs feet between/Hanging down the cheese machine/Hew it strew it do it too/Say it slay it just to do/Try to call yourself on the phone/Surely you are not at home/Sweep the swept floor once again/Stab yourself and feel the pain/Then stand and watch the speed/Clean your eyeballs wash your feet/Listen and repeat'. Or from "Stop These Lines": 'Morning peace dusty air/Clean your teeth comb your hair/Dressed in clothes you always wear/Go to work I won't be there/Lunchtime snackbar eating chips/Ketchup's running down your lips/Deadeyed waiters selling bibs/Which you have to fix with clips/Sitting waiting find an end/Meaningless with no comment/Is this life in your own hand/People are like grains of sand/Pick up streets and pull down skylines/Ravish women blast the mines/Burn the whiskies spill

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 17 2012 at 11:01
Originally posted by Alitare Alitare wrote:

What's wrong about writing about losing a loved one? That, in and of itself, can be ambiguous.

Take, for example, Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat'. It is effectively a song about losing a loved one (two of them, possibly). The song isn't regarding losing a loved one in death, but in betral, secrecy, grief, jealousy, regret, and virulent acceptance. It is so ambiguous and vague, yet scathingly direct. It ain't prog, either. Of course, hardly anybody could beat L. Cohen at the lyrics game, prog or otherwise. When it comes to pure poetry, I'd take him over Dylan (although not musically, not ever). 

I don't think I had a relevant point, though. I just had 'Famous Blue Raincoat' going on in my head - among others. And the skylight is like skin for a drum I'll never mend. And all the rain fell down, amen, on the works of last year's man. So bitter, so deep, so striking and well-written. I wish he'd stop making music and just release beat poetry (which is kinda what he's doing now, too bad his voice is wrecked beyond repair). 

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 17 2012 at 11:41
The main reason why one would find more bad (and good) lyrics in pop than he would in prog is simply that there is more pop than prog. If I dig through pop music, sure, I'll find a lot of bad lyrics, but I'll also find some of the best lyrics. Paul Simon, Bruce Springsteen, Sufjan Stevens, Jeff Tweedy are some of the greatest lyricists ever. Just take a look at Sufjan's lyrics on Casimir Pulaski, Chicago, or pretty much everything on "Illinoise." His ability to tell a simple story, yet effortlessly layer it with meaning, is to die for. On the other hand, generally, you will find better lyrics in prog than you will in pop. There are very few great lyricists in prog (Tim Smith from Midlake is the only one I can think of), but generally they are better. I actually enjoy Jon Anderson's lyrics from time to time. On the other hand, prog does have some of the worst lyrics. While I really enjoy the music of Comus, Gentle Giant, and Spirogyra, I lose my lunch at their lyrics.
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