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    Posted: February 06 2008 at 02:00
Apparently our editing privileges have been revoked again, and I wanted to add a review to my rating for The Bedlam in Goliath. If you can add it for me, that would be great. Here it is:
 
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While Amputecture has earned a very special place in my life and is certainly a near masterpiece, it was quite a difficult listen. Aside from a few segments, nothing clicked the first time around, and even the second time around for much of it. I would grow to love it, but couldn't help the feeling that it didn't stand up next to the two brilliant-beyond-words albums preceding it.
 
But with The Bedlam in Goliath, The Mars Volta have created a very fast-paced, aggressive yet both funky, melodic/memorable and powerful record that comes close to equaling De-Loused in the Comatorium and Frances the Mute. Thomas Pridgen's work is something to marvel at. This material suits him very well, though I really couldn't see him being able to play the less-is-more style of Jon Theodore (comparatively of course, as no one could say that Theodore's work was simple). Here, the music facilitates Pridgen's bombastic style perfectly. Cedric's vocals have a lot of effects throughout, which I'm not entirely fond of, but there are plenty of cleanly-sung melodic parts that are going to strike your soul with their beauty. Everyone else is on top of their game, and of course the sound is huge.
 
This album is amazing. It's long, but it feels as quick and short as De-Loused, which is 15 minutes shorter. No songs over 10 minutes long here; the songs are as short as 2:36 and as long as 9:32. It's a fresh output in all aspects for the group, and an absolutely mesmerizing one at that.
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 23 2008 at 14:25
I see that only SC's and PR's can edit their reviews...I'd like to remove the <p> and <I> and <b> from my review:  http://www.progarchives.com/Review.asp?id=162467
If it's possible, could someone with access do it for me...I sort of made a mess of it Embarrassed...for future reference, how can I create new paragrapsh, bold, and italic while making the codes disappear on the actual review?
 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 23 2008 at 15:26
Now wouldn't the Admins have a lot less work if this feature was re-expanded to all members, giving them oportunity to correct and improve their own work? Stern%20Smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 23 2008 at 15:29
Originally posted by Kotro Kotro wrote:

Now wouldn't the Admins have a lot less work if this feature was re-expanded to all members, giving them oportunity to correct and improve their own work? Stern%20Smile
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Was going to suggest the same. I got lot of reviews to redo or remake. And would be much easier for both, admins and non, to edit themselves.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 23 2008 at 15:41
Originally posted by jimmy_row jimmy_row wrote:

I see that only SC's and PR's can edit their reviews...I'd like to remove the <p> and <I> and <b> from my review:  http://www.progarchives.com/Review.asp?id=162467
If it's possible, could someone with access do it for me...I sort of made a mess of it Embarrassed...for future reference, how can I create new paragrapsh, bold, and italic while making the codes disappear on the actual review?
 
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Fixed. For new paragraphs use simply the space bar twice, nothing more.
 
Others are <i> word </i> or <b> word </b>.
 
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Thanks Guigo, I'll remember that (you may want to have someone update the review guidlines and tips) Smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 23 2008 at 17:44
Originally posted by Atkingani Atkingani wrote:

Originally posted by jimmy_row jimmy_row wrote:

I see that only SC's and PR's can edit their reviews...I'd like to remove the <p> and <I> and <b> from my review:  http://www.progarchives.com/Review.asp?id=162467
If it's possible, could someone with access do it for me...I sort of made a mess of it Embarrassed...for future reference, how can I create new paragrapsh, bold, and italic while making the codes disappear on the actual review?
 
Thanks
 
 
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Fixed. For new paragraphs use simply the space bar twice, nothing more.
 
Others are <i> word </i> or <b> word </b>.
 
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have the same problem
http://www.progarchives.com/Review.asp?id=162490

and with

http://www.progarchives.com/Review.asp?id=162469

except that in this one i didn't wrote the  <p> for the paragraph space. I just wrote it with the space but when I posted the review it appeared like it was one single paragraph
 can it be fixed?
just didn't know you had to use double space

anyone?



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Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 14 2008 at 18:26
Ok I have another edit, this one for my review of DT's Train of Thought.
 
First, I would like to change the star rating to 5 stars, and the text should be this:
 
This one brings up much controversy among Dream Theater fans. It takes much from disc one of Six Degrees: the uber heavy, difficult, long metal songs and a whole lot of jamming. It sure makes for a good crossover album, and a great album to introduce any metalhead to prog. The verses and the like are filled with complicated time changes and all that theory stuff that we came to adore Dream Theater for. The jams are beyond any jams anyone else could do. All in theory is as should be, the problem for everyone is that it's too much. Too much heavy, too much of the complexities, and maybe also because LaBrie gets to rap on "This Dying Soul." Other than the nearly three minute ballad "Vacant" that serves as an intro to the instrumental "Stream of Consciousness" (which long-time fans will get the most out of if anything) similar to the way "Wait for Sleep" serves as an intro to "Learning to Live," there are some clean portions in two songs, and the rest is all heavy. Good for some, bad for others. Quite frankly, if you don't like it, you still must admit that for what they were going for, they did darn well. Any Metallica/Megadeth/Pantera, etc. fan would be blown out of their mind by this album because it is so beyond what it sounds like. If you can't appreciate it, at least appreciate how the group is intertwining their music to become a very, very cohesive catalog. Take "This Dying Soul." it is the next step in the A.A. series, making references to "The Glass Prison" from the previous album. You may also notice the title "Stream of Consciousness" is a reference to a line in "Lines from the Sand." The band have begun making musical and lyrical references to their work as they first did with Scenes from a Memory. Be sure to pay attention to the lyrics and music for subtle or blatent references to something else in their catalog. In the epic closer, the band also manages to include "The Battle Hymn of the Republic" in the background of the resolution, after earlier using morse code beneath the music which taps an infamous Portnoy phrase. Just another reason to appreciate what these guys do. Now, I can't say this album is perfect, some spots in the opener and "Honor Thy Father" are a tad sub-par, but the rest of the song in both cases more than redeem themselves. The album really is a good one, it still has emotional substance among all the thrashing and pounding and shredding. And as I have said in the past: no matter how fast these guys are playing, every note is still well-considered and it still has emotional strain. It's a tough one to get into for many, but for those who can appreciate it, they certainly will. 4.5 stars.
 
I would also like to add this review to my existing rating of Behold...the Arctopus's Skullgrid:
 
Behold...the Arctopus is as strange as their name implies, and it's not just because they use a Warr guitar, nor is it because of Warr guitarist Colin's bizarre hair style, and it's not even the image of Colin, with his bizarre hairdo, playing a Warr guitar. Many of those who read their band name and lineup are immediately curious about hearing what this band sounds like, and upon hearing them, still have no idea. Some of those listeners may even call into question if these guys even know what they are doing with those instruments of theirs. Well, a guest appearance on your album by Jordan Rudess will quickly confirm that yes, they do know what they're doing, or at least they make it look really convincing. But before we digress into analyzin whether or not this band knows what they're doing, we must first remember that we have no idea what it is that they are doing, so it's impossible to tell. Luckily, it doesn't matter if there is a method to their madness, because it's still madness, and that is exactly what their goal is to deliver.
 
While mythozoologists have debated what exactly this "Arctopus" beast is, no conclusion has been made. All we know is that the Arctopus manifests itself when these three guys pick up instruments, and they have been nice enough to record some of the events that have ensued upon its said manifestation. Whatever the "Arctopus" is, it must be rabid. When the Arctopus is let loose, it goes on a rampage in which it beats and tears apart anything in it's general area. And this activity generates a racket that almost sounds like an atonal fusion of metal and jazz! Man am I glad I got the chance to hear this, because this is unlike anything I've seen or heard before! The bearers of the Arctopus have done well with their first full-length. First of all, they realize that people can't stand more than 40 minutes of this nonsense, and so the album clocks in at around 37 minutes long. Second, it gives me an explanation for why Colin's hair is so weird-looking. Clearly the beast has done a number on that mop of his. Third, it affirms my long-held belief that Canada and Jordan Rudess are the only two forces that can take on fercious mythological creatures. You can hear the Arctopus briefly in a calm state on the second track, and its yelping sounds almost like a Gordian Knot song. However, the Canadians can be a bit lazy (socialized medicine is a bad idea - get back to work so you can buy your own healthcare!), so that moment is a fleeting one. And then in "Transient Exuberance," where Rudess lays down a continuum solo, we hear the only other quiet segment of the recording, however, this one sounds more like the Arctopus had a series of nervous twitches because it found out that Rudess was nearby. But he couldn't stay for too long; he must have had some obligations with Dream Theater to attend to.
 
In conclusion, I actually do like this, and there actually is some seriously strong musicianship going on here. Unfortunately, I don't think this lived up to the potential they showed on their EP, and would even say that the songs on the EP are a little better, or at least more enjoyable. There are no melodies here, and that almost always causes an album to be less memorable. Nevertheless, this is something to be heard.
 
 
 
 
And how exactly does one gain "Prog Reviewer" privileges? I've been around a while and have written several reviews, and I assume I will write more in future.


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Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 15 2008 at 00:11
Well since nobody else has answered some of the questions I guess I'll do my best....


Originally posted by Moatilliatta Moatilliatta wrote:

 
And how exactly does one gain "Prog Reviewer" privileges? I've been around a while and have written several reviews, and I assume I will write more in future.


http://www.progarchives.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13080
The first section there discusses it pretty in depth




Originally posted by Kotro Kotro wrote:

Now wouldn't the Admins have a lot less work if this feature was re-expanded to all members, giving them oportunity to correct and improve their own work? Stern%20Smile



From the FAQ:
"For administrative reasons, only Prog Reviewers and Special Collaborators can edit their reviews."

Basically there's a bunch of reviews on the website and people could edit their reviews to things that the Admins don't really want on the site...there's other places where this is discussed.  I'm sure there may be other reasons too that I don't know of...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 15 2008 at 15:38
In response to asimplemistake^^^, (not to devalue anyone's contribution), but how is it that we have prog reviewers with less than thirty (according to guidelines), even less than ten total reviews, some of them still being only ratings? That just doesn't seem to fit.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 16 2008 at 17:39
Originally posted by ClassicRocker ClassicRocker wrote:

In response to asimplemistake^^^, (not to devalue anyone's contribution), but how is it that we have prog reviewers with less than thirty (according to guidelines), even less than ten total reviews, some of them still being only ratings? That just doesn't seem to fit.
 
Some were promoted before the guidelines appeared... a few others have asked to delete some of their reviews to do new ones. Smile
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Originally posted by Atkingani Atkingani wrote:

... a few others have asked to delete some of their reviews to do new ones. Smile


Sure! Wink


But here's another concern:

Guideline: How to enter your personal reviews page from the front page:

1) Remember a review you have once written, go to the band page, find the review and click your name! Voilį! You're at your reviews page!

2) If you cannot remember, or you haven't written any reviews, pick a random album and write a review. Then goto 1).


Would somebody add this to Site rules and guidelines page?
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: March 18 2008 at 02:32
Can someone please remove all of my ratings without reviews? Since I can't add reviews to any of them and I am looking for a possible promotion, yadda yadda, I would like those ones removed - only if it's not too much to ask, of course.

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 In this performance, Vai is supported with a great line up, featuring the supremely talented Tony Macalpine, Dave Weiner, the legendary Virgil Donati on drums and bass maestro Billy Sheehan. There is also some classic and truly iconic Vai songs on the set list. Yet, even with all this, I cannot help but feel somewhat disappointed by this DVD.

It starts off on a good rocker, Shy Boy, which if I recall is a song from Vai's David Lee Roth. A good song, but nothing spectacular and perhaps not the best opening song.

 
The next song, Giant Balls of Gold, is one of the better performances on here, with some great display's of Vai's amazing vibrato control, great melody, great solos and a cool duel between Sheehan And Steve towards the end of the song.
 
Erotic Nightmares is great, just as good as the studio album version in it's instrumental playing, and featuring some cool guitar interplay between Macalpine and Vai. Blood and Glory is where some of the problems seem to start. While in general the performance was good, there seems to have been some strange intonation issues at one point in the song, which sometimes make me cringe slightly.
 
Dave's Party Piece is a little solo piece from Weiner, good but not particularly stunning, but a welcome addition to the set nonetheless.
 
Blue Powder was top notch, well played and Sheehan really mastered the bass solo well.
 
The Crying Machine, sounded pretty good, but we really being to encounter some truly irritating visual effects and far too much camera angle cutting, which really detract from the performance. The Animal continues with irritating camera work at times. Vai added a middle section with some noodling around/improvising, but this gets boring after many views of this DVD and should have been left out of the song.
 
Bangkok, is again a camera angle barf fest, but otherwise fairly good. Tony gives us a keyboard solo while Vai dresses up for the next song, and I have to say, this solo is astounding stuff, highly emotional and technical at times, which would make anyone jealous of his ability to switch between guitar and keyboards so effortlessly.
 
Bad Horsie, which has become a somewhat classic Vai song, features Vai dressed up appropiately crazy and 'heavy' for this rendition of the song. Unfortunately I can't watch this song everytime I put this DVD on, as he does a lengthy section consisting of noises and feedback which is cool to watch the first time, but I began to question if it was at all neccessary as it just seems to drag on.
 
Chameleon is a song from one of Billy Sheehan's solo records, which I found to be a pretty boring song in the studio album format, and is unfortunately not much more interesting in this live format and could have been left off this DVD.
 
Deep Down Into The Pain doesn't start off sounding like the album version, instead featuring guitar solos from all three guitarists, and then a duel between Macalpine and Vai and then the intro of the actual song before the vocals kick in. It's fun viewing to see the shred skills of all three guitarists on here, but the annoying visual effects are not so much fun to watch though.
 
A rendition of Hendrix's Fire is next, with some hilarious banter from Vai before the song begins, but honestly I feel this wasn't a necessary inclusion in the set list, and the camera work/editing during the solo make it somewhat unbearable to watch the whole track. Little Wing was a lot better, with not only Vai's take on the original solo, but a nice solo of his own afterward, featuring his trademark right hand cross over muting technique. A truly great solo here.
 
 Whispering a Prayer is the best here on this DVD, and easily the most watchable for me. It's not the same as the Alive In An Ultra World version, but this is still just as beautiful and touching. The build up the to the solo is truly amazing, and the solo itself fast and fluid but still very melodic and uplifting. The rest of the DVD is somewhat less interesting than Whispering A Prayer for the most part, which is unfortunate.
 
Incantation is a good song, with much of Vai's great compositional ability, followed by Donati's thundering drum solo, another highlight of the DVD. Jibboom is good at first, but somehow just seems less interesting than the studio album version, and perhaps extended too long than necessary.
 
This DVD features easily the worst performance of For The Love of God in all of Vai's discography at this point in time. It just makes me cringe and I cannot bear to watch it, and there is a lot of noticeable mistakes in his playing, such as the beginning of the first fast two string lick where he just trills for a little bit before he recovers into the rest of the solo properly. This should have been left off the DVD for sure.
 
Liberty was very good, with a few more guitar fills than the studio album version, and Vai is clearly having fun here and his playing is just as emotive as the original album version.
 
The Attitude song is fun as always, and features blues-rock virtuoso guitarist Eric Sardinas as a guest player. There is solos from all guitarists here, as well as Sheehan, and I must say at least this song ended the set on a positive note.

All in all, a good DVD, but not great, and perhaps at least 15-20 minutes too long for my liking and too many bad visual effects, some shoddy camera work/editing and some botched perfomances.

Here's my updated review for my review of Steve Vai:Live In Astoria DVD, which didn't come out as readable as I would have liked when I first wrote it out. If it could be posted with my corrections, that would be much appreciatedSmile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: May 02 2008 at 08:12

So, I need some help for a review..

Appearently I was a bit confused this morning because of only 4 hours of sleep, strange tasting coffee, barking dogs and accidently a bit of alcohol (I'll never eat cake in the morning again, as long as I did'nt bake it b myself). And then.. well, I started reviewing, and just noticed my writing some messy stuff about Frank Zappa and the Mothers of Invention, when I read now.. it is embarrassing Dead
If you still can forgive me, here is an edited version of my review for Frank Zappa - Hot Rats (please leave out the hyphens at the top and at the bottom)
 
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''Hot Rats'' was the first solo album by Zappa. Whatever caused him to do an album on his own, it was no mistake, because the result is stunning. Here, he shows the jazz-influences in his music, and by the way creates one of the first albums to combine jazz and rock. The result is a nearly instrumental, sometimes strange, and mostly fascinating work.
 
Although this is called one of his solo albums, he (of course) does not handle all instruments. There is quite an impressive list of guest musicians here to help. All of them are obviously talented and have no fear to show it, as there are a lot of instrumental challenging passages spread over the record. We have guitars, basses, violins and keyboards, which sum up for interesting jazz (fusion) music. If you can not stand jazz, stay away from this. I know it is not a jazz record, but still. However, I suggest everyone to listen to this album at least once, to see/hear what this is.

The records I knew from Zappa were Apostrophe, Overnite Sensation and Sheik Yerbouti (reviews following), so it came quiet a shock to me when ''Peaches en Regalia'' started. That was something I never had expected from Zappa. In fact, it did only slightly sound like what I used to hear. But I liked it. Here, jazz and rock started to melt together into one special piece of music. The first song starts of the album very well - a catchy melody which will stay in your ears a long time, I promise! It has so much energy in it. The next we have ''Willie the Pimp'' with Captain Beefheart doing some extraordinary vocals to make it the most funny piece here. I have a weak point for ''Son of Mr. Green Genes'', with its fusion style more than obvius. A bit to much 'wah-ing' maybe, but it works fine. What nearly prevented me from giving five stars is ''The Gumbo Variations''. Though I like long songs, here it all is carried out too long. Almost 17 minutes of jamming is not very pleasant, especially when some dissonant chords jump in. The themes of the song could maybe be shortened to 7 minutes or so. Otherwise, you may feel a bit bored with the soloing. The rest are too excellent composed tunes of instrumental music, and it is that kind of instrumental you remember, what does not drift aimlessly and has a clear focus on melody. I am sure I will be able to go back to this in years, and still think ''hey, that's great music!''.

Well, this is really hard for me. I feel it is essential for anyone interested in jazz/fusion, as it was one of the first albums to literally fuse jazz and rock. Secondly, it shows another face of Zappa for fans.. but on the whole it is not perfect. The weak points are the solos sometimes drifting into pure chaos. As long as this is in structure, it deserves 5 stars. For the influence it had, for its meaning in the history of Zappa, and the hours I enjoyed with this, here is my rating. Close five stars. It may not be the perfect masterpiece, but is essential when you explore fusion sounds. It will help you to understand this combination. In my life, I heard a lot of music which tries to combine two or more styles. Mostly, it fails in being half/half. Zappa however knows how to melt them together to one. And this one deserves its five stars!

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This demo is where it all began for Agalloch, released only one year after the band formed and a very interesting demo this is indeed. The production is not exactly top notch, but I feel it actually adds to the rawness of the sound and helps with the general atmosphere of the songs on here. There are four songs on here, and it makes for a surprisingly long demo. To me, this is not a highly evolved or greatly progressive record, especially compared to some of their later work, but it was a sign of great things to come for the band. Yet, despite it not being overally progressive, it is still very creative and a unique album at the time in the metal scene. To really capture what this demo is about, it will require many many listens, and very close listens at that, with an appropiate atmosphere for listening sure to enhance the experience.

The album has a strong black metal influence and also a fair amount of the Gothenburg metal scene influence, much of which is highly evident on the track that starts the demo off, The Wilderness. It's an 11 minute epic, and you can hear the Gothenburg influence almost right away. I admit the very first black metal-esque high pitched shriek we hear makes me cringe as it just seems so much in the vain of stereotypical black metal. Yet for all its black metal/Gothenburg influence, I can still hear something that just makes it feel unique for it's time. Having heard much of their later work before this, I was a little surprised of the inclusion of the guitar solo in this track, since solos are not that common in Agalloch territory, but it fits perfectly here. While there is nothing flashy about the musician here, that doesn't matter here because the general sense of atmosphere doesn't require it. This is weakest song of the demo here, but still a very good song nonetheless.

I noted the production values earlier, and this is particularly evident if you listen to Embers Dress the Sky on the album Pale Folklore which was released in 1999, and the version on this demo. While fundamentally very much the same song, the earlier version gives me different emotions throughout, due to the different production and even being in a different key signature, which I think really made a big impact on the feeling too. Where the later version sounded more majestic and almost ethereal, the older version has a rougher and darker edge to it.

Foliorum Viridum was on the Of Stone, Wind, and Pillor EP, and you will notice they have very different track lengths. This is because Old Cabin actually begins where Foliorum Viridum would normally stop on Of Stone, Wind, and Pillor . For those of you used to the later Agalloch sound, the keyboards may come as a shock, as it did to me when I first heard this song, as I had only heard Ashes Against the Grain and then this demo straight after before having heard any of their other albums (that have been released at the time of this review). There is a lovely melancholic piano and keyboard choir arrangement from the moment you hit play, and I think it was a very well done approach especially after the first two metal orientated songs. All the keyboard elements here just add up to an incredibly atmospheric and moving piece of music. I love listening to this a lot, and and with Embers Dress the Sky I find it the most moving and emotionally stiring songs on the demo.

If you include where Old Cabin begins during the Foliorum Viridum track, this is another epic length song. Like The Wilderness, this is a very Gothenburg/Black metal influenced piece. While not an incredible song by any standards, it's still well written song with some great melodies throughout and progresses in an interesting fashion and I feel the album doesn't end on any real bad note.

While I don't think Agalloch had completely found their style yet, I could still hear their unique stamp written on this demo. To me although I feel it's not essential Agalloch, for those that are curious about the beginnings of Agalloch and want to go back further into their history to see how they evolved into the sound they would display later on, it's a good demo to listen to and enjoy.

 
 I made a factual error in my reviewEmbarrassed which I corrected in my edit above.
 
And btw, the corrections I made to my Steve Vai:Live At The Astoria review haven't come through yetConfused And I'm hoping that gets corrected sometime soonThumbs%20Up Obviously if you guys are busy, I don't mind waiting, I just want to make sure my edit comes throughSmile
Cheers!
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