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I stumbled upon these lyrics on one of the Ukrainian metal web-sites. I find them quite amusing.  Please tell me what you think.


Frozen tears

1

How can you crying on the tomb of mankind?

Mankind it’s coming to fall, fall

Teardrops on tomb transformation in hoarfrost

The end of humanity



Why do you preach to the end of mankind?

Nuclear winter has come, come

You understanding and dream of immortal

This is no sensing

2.

Frozen tears on the crystal glass inside your soul

Lifeless eyes in the depth of your abyss of thought

Don’t you cry! Equanimity hate to the fade in your fright

Don’t you try! To the change for the better this dying world

Why?

Scream of eternity to cut black silence

Why?

Emperor of fear to enthrone

Why?

Gates of the new world its open wide

Why?

The humans its will be done

3.

There was a peal of beastly frost and turn your tears in piece of ice

You suffering its mast be done, you thoughts its will be sacrifice

And pain, to spread inside your mind destructed of your morbid brain

You dead, you lasting foresight to paralyzed with fright and pain

Why?

Lost the millennium of morbid visions

Why?

Mystical creatures wake up

Why?

Thorns of eternity split the humanity

Why?

The frost its will be dawn

4.

Why do you crying on the grave of mankind?

Mankind it’s coming to fall, fall

Teardrops on tomb transformation in hoarfrost

The end of humanity


Sins for temptation


Sin for temptation

Temptation for falling souls

Open your eyes, wake up forget

Dreams of the fall, raiser to sin

Open your eyes, forgetting him

Pre refrain:

Sins for temptation, but you don’t redemption

Refrain;

SINS FOR TEMPTATION, TEARS FOR FEAR

RAGE FOR PAiN, LOOKING AROUND

THIS’ALL INSIDE YOU

2.

Sins for temptation

The everlasting life

Sinners and blasphemy

Open your mind

Original sin living’ into own brain

Mystical daemon we all rest in pain

Pre refrain

Sins for temptation, but you don’t redemption

Refrain;

SINS FOR TEMPTATION, TEARS FOR FEAR

RAGE FOR PAiN, LOOKING AROUND

THIS’ALL INSIDE YOU



time to liquid

1.

Time to liquid and spreads by eternity

Time is immortal, time it’s not dead

Time to deleted all sides by infinity

Time its own enemy time its own friend

Refrain:

Time to destroyed and stolen my sanity

Why do you bring me to abyss of dream?

Times are you terrible crashed my destiny

We’re victims of your turbulent stream

2.

Darkness integrity sides of my sensible

Perfect serenity into my dreams

Time to depraved all sides of the sanctity

Time it’s the beast of the eternal peace

Refrain:

Time to destroyed and stolen my sanity

Why do you bring me to abyss of dream?

Times are you terrible crashed my destiny

We’re victims of your turbulent stream

3.

Look at your life and drawing conclusion

Life after death? Or the death after life?

Why do you need the eternal redemption?

Breakdown religion and subvert of light!

Refrain:

Time to destroyed and stolen my sanity

Why do you bring me to abyss of dream?

Times are you terrible crashed my destiny

We’re victims of your turbulent stream

There's certainly a lot of them...

Looks like the author does not have English as first language - so full marks for such a courageous, epic attempt. IMHO it would be a useful exercise to get someone more familiar with the English language to correct the grammar.

Going beyond language, the style seems to lack pathos and is somewhat derivative. There's not too much there that hasn't been said in countless Metal bands, since the mid 1980s, be they death, doom or whatever the favoured labels happen to be.

I find them amusing in the same way that I find Eloy amusing...

Ah, I believe J666 is the author and was looking for some positive feedback. Guess he came to the wrong place.

Maybe Dr. 666 Suess on-line?

danbo wrote: Ah, I believe J666 is the author and was looking for some positive feedback. Guess he came to the wrong place. Maybe Dr. 666 Suess on-line?

J666 says he found them on a Ukranian website and finds them amusing...

I have to agree that they're amusing - I just hope I caught the right spirit of this thread!

threefates wrote: Maybe it was the Babelfish version of some Roger Water's lyrics

Hahaha, it's funny because it's possible...