Something I wrote!

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Hope you'll enjoy it.. wrote it a month/2 month's ago, please give me your opinion etc.

They became inventive, creative and started
communication.
Tired of each other and themselves they began
searching...
Searching for different ways, other approaches.
These creatures kept talking until one of them
raged.
On this very moment the sun went down,
over seas and acres of land.
When his rage calmed, they followed this sun
where they approached small creatures,
intelligent non the less.

As gifted to talk as they are, they will not speak.
In the silence they live in they achieve peace.
Accepting each other for what they are.

These creatures lived “in harmonium”,
and by the sight of these
They raged, for they lived in terror.
When comparing all these beautiful things,
makes all these of wich is not, greater.
So terror grew, their rage with them.
Their rage fed the flame of terror wich
was searching for more wood to burn on.

As they found each other to burn on, the sun
disappeared, leaving these two alone. For they
have found, but not have been able to achieve
peace. For leaving the sun because of this
ignorance their silence will now be complete.
   Leaving them with nothing but sand and air.

Edited by Radioactive Toy