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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 04 2013 at 13:54
Originally posted by M27Barney M27Barney wrote:

Lyrical content eh? Apart from Neal Morse's preaching most prog has adequate lyrical content and covers far more topics than typical pop - which is some geezer singing about some girls eyes and heart when he's really just interested in her tits and fanny......or some bint singing about how she's in love now she;s found out the size of his wallet.....
Gangsta rap is about shooting people...and country and western is about snakes with tits....running off with his best friend when he's trying to get the harvest in with a broken tractor......Or am I just being just to sterotypical ??
 
M27Barney LOL your stereotypical ideas by classifying people through the music genre/.style they listen is a tad off, this includes your perception about their lyrical content i.e. not everyone who listens to prog is into Star Trek, Wizards and Demons or video games. . BTW in reference singing about eyes, you have two nice set of eyes on your avatar pic WinkBig smile     
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 04 2013 at 13:25
Lyrical content eh? Apart from Neal Morse's preaching most prog has adequate lyrical content and covers far more topics than typical pop - which is some geezer singing about some girls eyes and heart when he's really just interested in her tits and fanny......or some bint singing about how she's in love now she;s found out the size of his wallet.....
Gangsta rap is about shooting people...and country and western is about snakes with tits....running off with his best friend when he's trying to get the harvest in with a broken tractor......Or am I just being just to sterotypical ??
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 03 2013 at 00:50
Originally posted by The Mystical The Mystical wrote:

^"Tears fall from the shameless
Shelter me, guide me to the edge of the water
Selfless are the righteous
Burden me, lead me like a lamb to the slaughter"

I personally don't think these are really bad lyrics.

HaHa, that's why I didn't say ALL of their lyrics, but they're were more than enough times on their last two albums where I thought to myself "you can't be serious..."
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 02 2013 at 22:16
Originally posted by prog058 prog058 wrote:

This could also be called the Fish appreciation thread.

Prog bands, while excelling musically, are often lackluster in the lyrical department.

Most prog musicians probably don't take an interest in language and literature, and this is probably the reason why.

What are your thoughts?
 
I honestly tend to focus mostly on intrumentals, they can make me high or most sentive too, never pay attention to lyrics (never could sing along either with my friends except hum the tunes), thus cannot answer the above. Stern Smile
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 02 2013 at 22:06
^"Tears fall from the shameless
Shelter me, guide me to the edge of the water
Selfless are the righteous
Burden me, lead me like a lamb to the slaughter"

I personally don't think these are really bad lyrics.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 02 2013 at 20:28
Personally I think the last few Dream Theater albums have been plagued by really awful lyrics. But they're just nowhere near as good as they used to be in general.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 02 2013 at 10:21
Originally posted by Big Ears Big Ears wrote:

Sometimes Jon Anderson gets away with his absurdist lyrics. Other times, I feel they are a waste of a great voice (and band). However, he's far from being alone. The other day, a boy band suddenly appeared on a TV programme I was watching and started to perform lyrics along the lines of, 'You and I are like a missiles in the sky, we go up, up, up.' Their curiously affected singing style and 'harmonies' were massively inferior to Jon Anderson's, but they are probably making pots of money.    

Yes and I heard it, they transmit strong feelings and cause a reaction in the listener - NAUSEA

cause you and i are like missiles in the sky 
we go uh uh uh up 
we go uh uh uh up 
and you and i were both born to collide and blow uh uh uh up 
we blow uh uh uh up 
when were together, explode 
detonation, up in smoke 
(over)

Not precisely poetry

 
            
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 02 2013 at 07:09
Steve Hackett has some pretty fine lyrics.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 02 2013 at 05:49
As much I love their music, the one prog band that instantly comes to mind when I hear "bad lyrics"...is ELP.
 
Man in the street nowhere to sleep
No time for nothing no Patek Phillipe
Pedal to the metal Blow by Blow
You're runnin' with the devil it's touch and go
They're leaving you nothing and nowhere to go
Just put you in the corner like an old banjo
The strings are breakin' but you can't say no
You're runnin' with the devil it's touch and go
Systematic one man show
You're caught up in the middle where the four winds blow
No salvation 20 below
You're runnin' with the devil it's touch and go
All systems go friend or foe
It's all dependin' on the dice you throw
Come without a warning like a U.F.O.
You're runnin' with the devil it's touch and go
You see this woman on a T.V. show
She's drippin' in diamonds from head to toe
They make you believe it's the status quo
You're runnin' with the devil it's touch and go
All systems go friend or foe
It's all dependin' on the dice you throw
Come without a warning like a U.F.O.
You're runnin' with the devil it's touch and go
 
 
(And I like that song a lot! LOL)
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 02 2013 at 05:16
Sometimes Jon Anderson gets away with his absurdist lyrics. Other times, I feel they are a waste of a great voice (and band). However, he's far from being alone. The other day, a boy band suddenly appeared on a TV programme I was watching and started to perform lyrics along the lines of, 'You and I are like a missiles in the sky, we go up, up, up.' Their curiously affected singing style and 'harmonies' were massively inferior to Jon Anderson's, but they are probably making pots of money.    
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: February 01 2013 at 22:50
Originally posted by twosteves twosteves wrote:

Originally posted by Horizons Horizons wrote:

Originally posted by Stevo Stevo wrote:

Originally posted by coolerking coolerking wrote:

I remember Q magazine reviewing (I think) Big Generator and they said Jon Anderson's lyrics would struggle to get a pass in A level English.

He definitely comes up with certain phrases that fit beautifully to certain passages of the music but in general I find his lyrics incomprehensible.
That used to really bother me about YES, until I started to think of his lyrics like I would an impressionistic painting. They are very effective at creating a mood , or a suggestion of a scene.
 
That's how they're supposed to be interrupted. Not all lyrics have to be blatant stories, or have zero subtlety. They can be ambiguous, mysterious, abstract. Too me, lyrics are another instrument. They can just sound good to make me connect to them, not talk about losing a love one or whatever. 

Jon Anderson says that is what his lyrics -he's the fifth instrument in Yes---what you describe about Yes lyrics---he wanted the words to create a sound and feel---a sound poem---at least that's what he said a Yes peak of creativity---later on he'd get a little "airey-fairey"---as Howe said---.

With the exception of "Tales From Topographic Oceans", I find that Jon Anderson's lyrics are only really great if they are not taken literally. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 17 2012 at 11:41
The main reason why one would find more bad (and good) lyrics in pop than he would in prog is simply that there is more pop than prog. If I dig through pop music, sure, I'll find a lot of bad lyrics, but I'll also find some of the best lyrics. Paul Simon, Bruce Springsteen, Sufjan Stevens, Jeff Tweedy are some of the greatest lyricists ever. Just take a look at Sufjan's lyrics on Casimir Pulaski, Chicago, or pretty much everything on "Illinoise." His ability to tell a simple story, yet effortlessly layer it with meaning, is to die for. On the other hand, generally, you will find better lyrics in prog than you will in pop. There are very few great lyricists in prog (Tim Smith from Midlake is the only one I can think of), but generally they are better. I actually enjoy Jon Anderson's lyrics from time to time. On the other hand, prog does have some of the worst lyrics. While I really enjoy the music of Comus, Gentle Giant, and Spirogyra, I lose my lunch at their lyrics.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 17 2012 at 11:01
Originally posted by Alitare Alitare wrote:

What's wrong about writing about losing a loved one? That, in and of itself, can be ambiguous.

Take, for example, Cohen's 'Famous Blue Raincoat'. It is effectively a song about losing a loved one (two of them, possibly). The song isn't regarding losing a loved one in death, but in betral, secrecy, grief, jealousy, regret, and virulent acceptance. It is so ambiguous and vague, yet scathingly direct. It ain't prog, either. Of course, hardly anybody could beat L. Cohen at the lyrics game, prog or otherwise. When it comes to pure poetry, I'd take him over Dylan (although not musically, not ever). 

I don't think I had a relevant point, though. I just had 'Famous Blue Raincoat' going on in my head - among others. And the skylight is like skin for a drum I'll never mend. And all the rain fell down, amen, on the works of last year's man. So bitter, so deep, so striking and well-written. I wish he'd stop making music and just release beat poetry (which is kinda what he's doing now, too bad his voice is wrecked beyond repair). 

Jennifer Warnes......Famous Blue Raincoat....about to be reissued.......one of my favorite albums.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: November 17 2012 at 10:57
'Rotten eyeballs feet between/Hanging down the cheese machine/Hew it strew it do it too/Say it slay it just to do/Try to call yourself on the phone/Surely you are not at home/Sweep the swept floor once again/Stab yourself and feel the pain/Then stand and watch the speed/Clean your eyeballs wash your feet/Listen and repeat'. Or from "Stop These Lines": 'Morning peace dusty air/Clean your teeth comb your hair/Dressed in clothes you always wear/Go to work I won't be there/Lunchtime snackbar eating chips/Ketchup's running down your lips/Deadeyed waiters selling bibs/Which you have to fix with clips/Sitting waiting find an end/Meaningless with no comment/Is this life in your own hand/People are like grains of sand/Pick up streets and pull down skylines/Ravish women blast the mines/Burn the whiskies spill

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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 07 2012 at 08:08
I don't understand why many feel progressive music has the most poorest lyrics.
I personally feel they have the best lyrics.
Its just that not many understand the feel or the tone of the lyrics which makes it looks bad.
But, I would say those people are just crippled to not contemplate something that beautiful.
Take any artist.
Opeth, Yes, Transatlantic, Neal Morse, Dream Theater, Jethro Tull, ELP, Rush.
I always adore the music and the lyrics equally.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 05 2012 at 08:25
Originally posted by Horizons Horizons wrote:

Originally posted by Stevo Stevo wrote:

Originally posted by coolerking coolerking wrote:

I remember Q magazine reviewing (I think) Big Generator and they said Jon Anderson's lyrics would struggle to get a pass in A level English.

He definitely comes up with certain phrases that fit beautifully to certain passages of the music but in general I find his lyrics incomprehensible.
That used to really bother me about YES, until I started to think of his lyrics like I would an impressionistic painting. They are very effective at creating a mood , or a suggestion of a scene.
 
That's how they're supposed to be interrupted. Not all lyrics have to be blatant stories, or have zero subtlety. They can be ambiguous, mysterious, abstract. Too me, lyrics are another instrument. They can just sound good to make me connect to them, not talk about losing a love one or whatever. 

Jon Anderson says that is what his lyrics -he's the fifth instrument in Yes---what you describe about Yes lyrics---he wanted the words to create a sound and feel---a sound poem---at least that's what he said a Yes peak of creativity---later on he'd get a little "airey-fairey"---as Howe said---.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 05 2012 at 06:35
If someone says that, show them any Peter Hammill/VdGG song and that's it.
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 04 2012 at 19:09
Originally posted by RedNightmareKing RedNightmareKing wrote:

I'm a huge Dream Theater fan, yes. But sometimes... the lyrics just make me cringe. I mean, "The Count of Tuscany" is such a brilliant piece instrumentally, even if there is a bit of Petrucci/Rudess noodling. The lyrics, however, are just a completely different story... They don't work for me. Same for some of the material on Systematic Chaos. Too cheesy! I mean, I miss the DT songs that are a little deeper, not the ones talking about a pharoah's wrath or warmongering general. Save that for the power metal people. But in general, progressive rock lyrics (outside of some DT stuff) are really top-notch, ESPECIALLY Peter Sinfield. 

I'm a DT fan too, and they've had some good lyrics in the past. 

Some of their recent stuff, though, you're right, the lyrics are very cheesy. 'The Count of Tuscany', 'A Nightmare to Remember', 'The Dark Eternal Night' etc. 

I personally find Transatlantic's stuff to be very cheesy. Instrumentally, it's good, but the lyrics, oh god, the LYRICS.

I think Steven Wilson is a very good lyricist. Some may disagree. But I enjoy both the music and the lyrics in his work. 

Overall, I think a lot of prog lyrics are leagues ahead of what passes for pop music in the charts these days. 
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: September 04 2012 at 19:00
I'm a huge Dream Theater fan, yes. But sometimes... the lyrics just make me cringe. I mean, "The Count of Tuscany" is such a brilliant piece instrumentally, even if there is a bit of Petrucci/Rudess noodling. The lyrics, however, are just a completely different story... They don't work for me. Same for some of the material on Systematic Chaos. Too cheesy! I mean, I miss the DT songs that are a little deeper, not the ones talking about a pharoah's wrath or warmongering general. Save that for the power metal people. But in general, progressive rock lyrics (outside of some DT stuff) are really top-notch, ESPECIALLY Peter Sinfield. 
I consider drone metal to be progressive...
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Direct Link To This Post Posted: August 30 2012 at 11:59
Hi folks, can anyone help me identify the song from the opening lyrics below? It's from around 1970 by a guitar/bass/piano/drums/vocal combo. My dad taped it onto his old reel-to-reel but never remembered who it was by!

I walk the crowded pavements
The people I see
All trying to be what they're not
They act just like me (x4)
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