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moshkito
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Posted: November 18 2024 at 20:20 |
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Hi, Agreed ... although I think poetry has more weigh since the word has to stand up "by itself" ... as opposed to the lyrics, that are relying on some music behind to carry it, and then there is the suggestion that the music itself is a good backing for the lyrics ... many times it isn't and we immediately comment on it. There are very few, for me, folks that are really good at illustrating lyrics, and we can almost go back 55 years and watch Mick Jagger in the film "Performance" give us the first MTV piece ... and show us how to make some lyrics stand up and then some ... I find it a really big stretch on a lot of bands these days, trying to do something as good, or as well defined ... the main issue being that rock folks hate "directors" and think they are better actors than the hackers in your local theater! And I'm not sure of many of these folks ... as my feeling is that the band would likely be getting more attention, if it were better defined and worked, although that is hearsay, and might not be valid. But, in general, bands that define these things to a really good detail, are eventually found and heard. It might take a few years as we have found with some old psychedelic stuff ... but the Internet is good at making sure that we all know it exists, heard or not. Watch the film "Neruda" and listen to the words ... or even Ginsburg in "Tonight We All Love in London" ... where, reading his stuff doesn't click with me, but hearing him? Wow ... that is good! There aren't many rock singers that can even come close to that quality ... because a lot of the words themselves are not as important as the band, or the song itself, which has the famous riff, etc, etc, etc. And, in many ways this was the art in Led Zeppelin that helped them a lot ... it was very theatrical for some time and RP made sure that it was understood, though many men don't like it because it is so sexy for a lot of women. But, for RP, it was very real, and not fake, and this is a massive difference. Compare this to BD, with YES, when I saw them one of the the last tours by Chris Squire and BD was totally out of it, did not know or understand the lyrics and was using 1000 year old had gestures to make it look like all he sang had meaning ... I can't believe that YES even allowed something like that to take place. It was a real shame to see that. I kinda thought at that point that Jon's words were just really poor ... and while some of them are not great, he is way better than seeing this ... at least he knows what he means and sings like it! Kinda reminds me of the mid 60's with Sgt Pepper's that all of a sudden got a bunch of copy kat bands ... doing fun things ... but I'm not sure that we will confuse Winchester Cathedral with poor, or good lyrics! I don't think that there are "worst" lyricists per se, since so much of it is blended into that band's specific work which makes it harder to say something about it ... and then we have Francesco (Banco) singing, and we don't even know if the lyrics are good or bad, but it sure sounds good. The same for Francis Decamps in Ange ... but at least, by the attitude and feeling around it, that the lyrics are important ... and specially so, in France, where the wording had been a major issue in theater, and then their music. It has to have that incredible depth of feeling and emotion or it was considered crap.
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^ Not all (possibly not many) prog lyrics would stand alone as good poetry, and conversely, much good poetry would struggle to be set to music in the form of a song. Poetry and lyrics are similar but distinct written word forms tho there is a certain amount of crossover.
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moshkito
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Hi, I look at it a bit .... left field. I (more or less) started with the things that were called "art rock", and one of the important things for some of those works, was the POETRY, and how it was presented ... we got to understand that "lyrics" were not only mundane, but also silly, in most radio stuff in the early days, and psychedelia poked a huge hole in that idea, by making fun of it, so to speak ... but the main difference ... no one was going to confuse the poetry showing in The Moody Blues to the crap in yummy yummy I got love in my tummy ... which is the ugly stuff that "art rock" wanted to get away from. In some ways, the word "art rock" just about makes sense here, instead of comparing the lyrics to another era or poet ... and this is the hard part of this thread, when "lyricists" are kinda comparing a lot of writers to just a bunch of songs, that ... I suppose we could say have no literary value in them? But the song became famous and sold, see? These days, I no longer look at "lyrics" as poor poetry, or vice versa, as there are many folks out there that are quite capable, except that no one is going to publish a book of their "poetry" .... like so many did for Jim Morrison, Peter Hammill, and so others. I don't even know if Pete Brown had any books published, but we know that his "ability" with lyrics went downhill after Cream for some reason, if some of the stuff he did afterwards was a clue.
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I don't know who wrote Greg or ELP's lyrics before Pete Sinfield arrived, but in general, him, Keith Reid (Procol), Pete Brown (Cream, and J Bruce) or Palmer James (Crimson, Supertramp & Emergency) had obscure poetry talents, which I won't condemn on the account that it doesn't make sense to me. |
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Robert Wyatt is normally not a bad lyricist, but when he sings the alphabet?
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BTW the voice who says "The Rednex, Shockin'!" at 2:24 mark is none other than Nad fricking Sylvan. :D Edited by Hrychu - November 12 2024 at 06:56 |
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^^In the PA forum rules it states personal insults are not allowed. Or does that apply to only certain members?
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For the record, Madrigal is my #1 favorite track on Tormato. Except for the nonsense lyrics. I mean, "seventh age"? Like, why is that specific era significant for those "sacred ships" to sail? Is it the same thing as the "Golden Age" mentioned earlier in the song? Is it something else? Man, Jon Anderson must've been tripping hard.
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You don't have to get all sarcastic and rude because someone disagrees with you. I agree with hrychu here, i think the Madrigal lyrics are not good. |
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A movement is accomplished in six stages and the seventh brings return seven is the number of the young light it falls when darkness is increased by one It might be as uncomprehensible as some of Jon's lyrics, until you realize that Syd is talking about the "I Ching"
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Foolish?! Bad lyrics can ruin the listening experience no matter the genre. it's no different with prog. And Yes lyrics are problematic, half of the time people don't know what they mean . Even the lyrics above fall in this category.
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You are the most illusive though, despite your long posts. Can you be on topic for once and be on point?!
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Hi,
It's a real shame that some of you can only imagine that this is all some idealistic concept of mine about high-art, or better yet ... internet art! For the longest time, up until the Internet age not everything was "known" and there seemed to be a distinction between the artistic stuff (as defined by academia more or less) and the rest ... today, there is no such thing, and honestly, I'm glad of it ... but some folks still go around thinking that the "high art" stuff is not as important as some of the other crap ... I'm don't think of it that way ... what might be considered "high art" by some of the folks here, is not me! Lyrics, like a lot of literature, are gloriously illusive ... and folks here are not happy with someone saying something they do not agree with because it is not the popular ash kissing sentiment ... not to mention that tomorrow's expression will be totally different and a new "art" form. One could even suggest some of these folks are experimenting with words to add to their music in some cases.
Edited by moshkito - November 12 2024 at 04:34 |
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Moshkito. You need to practice Logorrhea management real bad. It's not really criticism, more like a friendly advice.
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Ok, while I'm here: I listen to everything and even check out newer popular music (even songs in the actual charts), so my impression is that there's far more awful lyrics written than good nowadays. None of the worst offenders create anything resembling Prog though. -on topic: the short period I was getting into - or rather trying to get into Porcupine Tree, I often found Steven Wilsons lyrics very on the nose and sometimes genuinely cringeworthy. But he also has his moments where music and lyrics go perfectly together. So I guess I find him uneven and not plain bad as such. I never became the biggest fan, but I still enjoy some of PT's music nevertheless. If the lyricist isn't a native speaker of english - like myself, I'm usually very forgiving. I don't mind a little clumsiness - or vocalists like Damo Suzuki - who seem to be mainly just playing with words. Vocalists that rub me the wrong way are much worse than bad lyricism. |
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